The Letter from Five Years Ago

My sister brought the letter to me yesterday in the morning. I was very surprised, because that letter was from myself of five years ago. Then, I remembered I wrote for myself of 20 years old when I was a junior high school student and it is before few days when I graduate.

Then event and thought were written in the letter, so I read this letter and it brought me back old memories. It was funny, because I wrote about impudent things. However I have liked English since in those days so I wrote I’m glad that if myself of 20 years old to do about English. And I was glad because I study English in the university and it was realized. I read this letter, and I thought that I should more study about English, and I want to more well English.

I wasn’t able to imagine myself of 20 years old and I thought that after five years is still a long way off when I wrote the letter. However actually five years rolled on quickly. And I thought that 20 years old is an adult when I was a child, but I became 20 years old, I feel it isn’t adult all that. However I do that I want to do it and I want to lead a full life in the future.

The coming of age ceremony is going to take place on January 3 in Tamana. And it is held a class reunion of junior high school in same day, so I can see a lot of friends when I was junior high school student. Therefore I’m looking forward to seeing them.

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"Up"

I went to watch the movie theater with my mother and my sister yesterday. We watched the movie “Up”. I knew about the story, but I didn’t know how it was ending. However “Up” was very interesting and exciting to me.

First of all, “Partly Cloudy” of short film was very interesting. It was shown before “Up”. I didn’t know about this short film. This short film story is about a cloud and the friendship of the bird. I was moved this short film.

“Up” characters are Carl, Ellie, Russell, dog Dug, bird Kevin and so on. Carl and Ellie were the old cuple who liked adventure. And Ellie passes away, so Carl suspended from helium balloons to his house, and he went to the trip the house and all. Then, he take the various adventures.

I thought that Carl was cute grandfather, and characters are individual and cute. And Carl treasured his house, but he gave up it at the ending. I watched such scene, and I thought that it is important for us to give up treasure and take a step forward. I got courage from this movie. I was glad that I watched the movie “Up”.

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BR 2-10: Pinocchio

I have watched Pinocchio movie of Disney before, but I read this book, this book differs from I knew story. Therefore, this book is very interesting to me.

There were some different points in a movie and the book. First, When Geppeto runs after Pinocchio. Then, Gepetto was mistaken by the police, and he was arrested. Also, Pinocchio and cricket got along very well in the movie, but Pinocchio hit cricket with a hummer. I shocked such scene. And, Gepetto and Mr. Cherry were wearing a wig. It was surprised, but very funny. Besides, there were the points it were different, but I was able to enjoy because book and movie were different story each other.

However I thought that Gepetto was very kind, because he treat Pinocchio like his son. And he sold his only coat to buy Pinocchio a school book and some clothes. Because Pinocchio disappeared, Gepetto ran after him all the time. I read such scene, I though that Gepetto really loved Pinocchio.

I was surprised that I read this book, because this book different from I knew story and movie. It happened various adventures this book. However Pinocchio became a real boy at the last. Therefore I excited as I read this book.

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Collodi, C. (2004). Pinocchio. London: Usborne Publishing.

BR 2-09 : The Hunt for Gold

I read the book “The Hunt for Gold”. I have read this book’s series before. The book that I read before was very interesting, so I borrowed this book again. Wilma, Wilf, Biff and Chip went back in time, and they did adventure.

Wilf had chewing gum at all time. There were Wilma, Wilf, Biff and Chip in the bedroom. Suddenly, the magic key took them on adventure. They arrived at a river. There were a boy and a girl there. They looked for tiny bit of gold. Wilma, Wilf, Biff and Chip became got along very well with them. Their names are Luck and Alice. They looked for gold together. Then Luck’s father found big gold, so they ate chewing gum while they went to the town to sell the gold with a carriage. Then, robbers came over, and they looked for the gold everywhere, but it didn’t find, and they left there, because Wilf’s chewing gum stuck to a carriage, and saved the gold. And Wilma, Wilf, Biff and Chip went back home.

The children’s adventure is interesting, and I didn’t think helped with chewing gum, and unexpected, so it was exciting for me.

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Hunt, R. (1994). The Hunt for Gold. Oxford: Oxford University Press.

BR 2-08: Audrey Hepburn

I have liked Audrey Hepburn since before. It is “ Roman Holiday” that I looked her movie for the first time. Then, I became like her. I read this book, and I knew about Audrey Hepburn.

She was born in May 4, 1929 in Brussels Belgium. Her parents got a divorce, and she spent with her mother in Dutch her childhood, and she experienced the war and poor life. After the war, they moved to London, and she took the opportunity and she became the actor. After that, she appeared a lot of movies and stages. Especially “Roman Holiday” made Audrey world famous, and she received a lot of awards.

She experienced marriage and divorce two times, and she has borne two sons. She retired in Steven Spielberg’s “Always”. Afterward, she started to work for poor people. She visited in Africa, and she helped a lot of poor, hungry and sick children. On January 20, 1993, she died sixty-four in Switzerland.

This book is easy for me to understand English, so I knew about her life, her movies and so on. She was very beautiful and kind woman. Her life happened various things, for example, happy, sad, hard and so on. However she could do that she wanted to do it, so I thought that she was happy life. I read this book, I could know Audrey Hepburn, and I want to watch her movies “Breakfast at Tiffany’s”, “My Fair Lady” and the like.

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Rice, C. (2000). Audrey Hepburn. Edinburgh: Person Education Limited.

Essay 2-03b: My English Learning Story

I think that it is important for us to learn languages, because it is necessary for communication. We learn English as second language about six years in Japan. Therefore, the English is an immediate thing for us. Also, I came the university, and I’m a British and American English major, so it is a much more immediate thing for me. I'm going to write about how I have learned English through in the past, the present and the future.

I have been interested in English and foreign countries since I was a child. First of all, I have begun to be interested in English and foreign countries since I began to watch video drama from overseas. I especially liked and I watched video dramas are “Fullhouse” and “Sabrina, the Teenage Witch” when I was elementary school student. I looked forward to watching these video dramas every week then, and I began to I thought that I want to that I can understand and speak English. It is the sign for I was interested in English. Also, I was interested in foreign lives, so I became I want to go to overseas.

I started studying English when I was a junior high school student. I liked English class, and I enjoyed I have the classes with assistant language teacher. I learned American culture and various things from her. I began to listen western music as that time, so I was much more interested in foreign countries.

However I became a high school student, it was difficult for me to understand English. So I didn’t study English as much as in junior high school. But I began to like English again while I listen western music and watched foreign movie and so on, so I thought I should study English, and I wanted to I can understand English very well. Then, I took Society for Testing English Proficiencies. I took third level and semi-second level.

When I entered the university, I felt English classes are difficult again, because there are a lot of various classes about the English. At first, I have never written essay in English before, so it was difficult for me to write sentence in English. But I want to more study it, and I could write essay in English than before.

Now, I’m taking various classes about the English. For example, I study English language history, Britain and American culture and Britain and American literature. Then, I took TOEIC many times to level up an English skill. I will take it again in December. In addition, I taking teaching course, so I teach English in the teaching course. I realize that teaching English is very difficult. I have to ponder about how I teach English for students, so these are difference take English class. Therefore, I think that I want to increase more knowledge about English, culture and so on. Moreover, I increased the opportunity expose to English since I was a sophomore better than I was a freshman. For example, write the blog in English, paper in English. However I think that I should do more to level up English skill.

Above all, in the future I want to I can understand and speak English very well. I hope to visit various places around the world, and to come in contact with local people. I’m some interested in becoming English teacher, but I don't decide for I want to do the job yet for sure whether I’m up for it. I want to job in which I have to use English. I have a lot of I want to do in future. Predict I want to continue studying English for that reason.

I think that English is used in the future better than now all over the world. So it is important for us to we can use English. I want to do things in future come out while I write this essay through the past, the present and the future. However I realized that I lack the knowledge about word, grammar and so on. Therefore I want to give an English skill from now on.

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Officer Election Party

December 18

I joined the Youth Hostel club. Our club changed the generation since Takuma festival finished, so we sophomore became the top generation. And our club gave officer election party that day.

I was assistant account before, so I became accountant. Accountant and public relation had to various work, so we prepared and talked since before. We went shopping at the market the day before. Accountant had to do information desk, so my friend, my juniors and I did information desk. But a lot of people came there, so we were very busy there. However we could it going smoothly.

After that, we greeted other club. There are a lot of friends so I enjoyed it. And I talked my friends, my seniors and my juniors, so I was happy. The only first party took place in this time, so I couldn’t talk my friends, my seniors and my juniors than other party. But I was glad that I saw a lot of people. And I put up at my friend home, and we talked about our club, friends and so on all the time.

It was big event of our club for the first time, so we were nervous and we made a little mistake. However this party could go smoothly, so it finished evenly, and it was good. Also I think that it is important for us to prepare, talk again and again, and I hope that next party is going smoothly too.

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Party

December 5

I took the TOEIC at the university in the morning. I was busy that week, so I couldn’t study about TOEIC too much. I took the test after an interval of half a year. Therefore I felt difficult this test, and I regretted that I couldn’t study too much. I think that I should study more next time. I want to get a high score at TOEIC sometime.

I had a meeting of my club from afternoon. We talked about a new president. After finished, my friends, seniors, juniors and I went shopping for the party.

They came in my home, and we gave the fried bread ice party. First, the bazaar members had a nabe party. We ate a curry nabe, and it was delicious. After that, we played cards game, and the pair which lost at cards went to buy for coca cola at near vending machine. They their intention was to buy two coca cola, and they put the button then six Coca Cola came out of a vending machine. We were surprised very much. We played cards again, and we talked a lot of various things from then on.

Many friends and seniors came over at my home since became nearly at midnight. My senior, friend and I fried the fried bread ice for them, and we ate a lot of it. And we ate, drank and talked until morning.

It was happy and full for me to that day. I want to give the party with them again.

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Reading IV News Quiz 2

News Quize

1. A woman arrested for a fraud case concerned the men death case. What fraud was woman arrested for?
2. The Defense Minister appears to accept about the relocate plan. What is the plan?
3. The Health, Labor and Welfare Ministry want to be tax exempt about the certain plan. What is the plan?
4. Who is the Osaka Governor of the intention to relocate the prefectural government’s main office?
5. What sightseeing spot works hard to invite a tourist?
6. Who is the former British Prime Minister that the first EU president to become the candidate?
7. Who is the pop singer plants tree in Malawi girls school?
8. Where is the country Sumitomo Life Insurance Co. will expand in?
9. Did the Japanese overseas tourist in September rose several percent than the same month last year?
10. Where is the Olympics site in 2016?

Answer
1. Marriage fraud (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p1)
2. Futenma plan (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p1)
3. The child-rearing allowance (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p1)
4. Toru Hashimoto (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p2)
5. Hot springs (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p4)
6. Tony Blair (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p7)
7. Madonna (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p7)
8. Vietnam (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p8)
9. 15 % (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p8)
10. Rio de Janeiro (The Daily Yomiuri, October 28, p22)

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BR 2-07: Beyond Strange Street

I read the book “Beyond Strange Street”. I was interested in this book’s story, and I think that this book’s characters are very cute.

Sam lay in bed, but she could hear loud, cross voices, so she couldn’t sleep. So she got out of the bet at night. She rode in an up lift, and pushed written as W.W. button. And the lift went up, and arrived at strange place.

Sam excited, but just a bit scared, and she wondered if she should go back. She met the strangest little creature at the time. His name is Obby. He is the strangest little creature, but very cute, and kind. They became getting along each other. And he helped Sam, and she could return real world. Sam promised Obby come again in here. And Sam’s adventure ended.

Obby is very strange, but cute. I interested in this book’s characters. Also, this story is enjoyable.

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Umansky, K. (2001). Beyond Strange Street. England: Literacy Land.

Essay 2-03a: My Language Learning Story

I think that it is important for us to learn language, because it is necessary for our communication. We learn English as second language for six years in Japan. Therefore, the English is an immediate thing for us. Also, I came the university, and I’m a Britain and American English major, so it is a more and more immediate thing for me. I'm going to write about I learn English through the past, the present and the future.

I have been interested in English and foreign country since I was a child. First of all, I have begun to be interested in English and foreign country since I began to watch a foreign video drama. I especially liked and I watched video dramas are “Fullhouse” and “Sabrina, the Teenage Witch” when I was elementary school student. I was looking forward to watching these video dramas every week then, and I began to thought that I want to I can understand and speak English. It is the signal for I was interested in English.

I started study English when I was a junior high school student. I like English class, and I enjoyed I had the class teach from assistant language teacher. Also, I began to often listen western music as that time. However I became a high school student, it was difficult for me to understand English therefore I didn’t study English too much better than before. But I though that I like English while I listen western music and watched foreign movie and so on, so I thought that I should study, and I took Society for Testing English Proficiency. When I entered the university, I felt English classes are difficult again, because there are a lot of various classes about the English. But I want to more study it.

Now, I’m studying various classes about the English. For example, English history, Britain and American culture, Britain and American literature and the like. Then, I took TOEIC many times to give an English skill, and I will take it in December. In addition, I take teaching course, so I teach English in teaching course. I realize that teaching English is very difficult that difference take English class. Therefore, I think that I want to increase more knowledge about English, foreign country and so on. Moreover, I increased the opportunity expose to English since I was a sophomore better than I was a freshman. For example, write the blog in English, write the paper in English. However I think that I should more to give an English skill.

Above all, I want to I can understand and speak English very well. And I hope I visit various places in foreign country, and I want to come in contact with local people in future. I’m interested in English teacher my future job, but I don't decide I want to do the job yet clearly. However, I want to do the job to use English. I have a lot of I want to do in future. I want to continue learning English for that reason.

I think that English are used more in future better than now all over the world. So it is important for us to we can use English. I want to do things in future come out while I write this essay through the past, the present and the future. However I realized that I lack the knowledge about word, grammar and so on. Therefore I want to give an English skill from now on.

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My Language Learning Story

Past
・I watched American TV and foreign movie when I was a child.
・I listened foreign music when I was in junior high school and high school student.

Present
・I study English every day.
・I take the TOEIC many times.
・I learn English teaching course.

Future
・I want to I can speak English very well.
・I want to do the work that I use English in the future.

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Teaching Course

It was very hard for me yesterday, because I have from the first period to the fifth period at Thursday. Also, I have teaching course from the third period to the fifth period running.

First, I had to speech for five minutes. The theme is education problem. I think that the truancy is serious problem with Japanese education, so I spoke about the truancy. I couldn’t speak well, because I was very nervous, and I had not much opportunity to practice of speech. However the speech for five minutes through I learned the importance of announcement my opinion.

I had to make in English class at the fourth period. We use the textbook of the eighth grader in this class and we play the part of teacher and the part of student by turns and teach it. It was the turn that I made the part of teacher for the first time yesterday. Therefore I prepared for the class from how many days before. However I couldn’t make my class, because I was very nervous and for the first time. I thought that it was hard to teach it, because the preparations for class need to take time. I want to make the next class better than before.

I submitted the paper about the compulsory education at the fifth period. We made groups and discussed about compulsory education. I heard the various opinions of a lot of people, and it was studied very much.

It is very hard for me to teaching course. I can learn various things such as the work of the teacher, problems about the education, and it became study for me.

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Speaking Survey Question and Answers Data

Our topics are food and restaurant. We survey about it.

Personal Questions
1. How old are you?
2. Are you a male or female?
3. What is your blood type?
4. What department are you in?

Yes / No Questions
1. Do you eat breakfast?
2. Do you need more eating place?
3. Do you like take out?
4. Do you want to open on Sundays?
5. Do you need seats in a smoking section?
6. Do you need any convenience stores besides Lawson?
7. Are you satisfied with the present student’s dining hall?
8. Do you need a café?
9. Do you usually eat lunch at school?
10. Do you need vending machines of food?

ABCD questions
1. What fast food shop do you like best?
A. McDonald B. MOS BURGER C. KFC D. Mr. Doughnuts
2. What kind of food do you like?
A. Japanese B. Italian C. French D. Chinese
3. At which building do you want a restaurant?
A. No.14 building B. No.11 Building C. No.3 building D. No.4 building
4. What time is the best to open the restaurant?
A. 8:00 a.m. B. 8:30 a.m. C. 9:00 a.m. D. 9:30 a.m.
5. What time is the best to close the restaurant?
A. 7:00 p.m. B. 8:00 p.m. C. 9:00 p.m. D. 10:00 p.m.
6. How many seats do you want?
A. 100 B. 200 C. 300 D. 400
7. Where do you usually eat lunch?
A. The students’ dining hole B. LAWSON C. Bakery D. Other

Open Questions
1. What is your favorite food?
2. How much do you usually use for lunch?
3. How much can you use for lunch to the maximum?
4. What kind of restaurant do you want?


Answers Data
*Total answers (130)

A1. 18(13), 19(30), 20(55), 21(24), 22~(8)
A2. M(59), F(71)
A3. F (33), E (31), C (54), SW (12)
A4. A (51), B (43), O (22), AB (14)
A5. Y (53), N (77)
A6. Y (85), N (45)
A7. Y (71), N (59)
A8. Y (68), N (62)
A9. Y (78), N (52)
A10. Y (61), N (69)
A11. Y (42), N (88)
A12. Y (84), N (46)
A13. Y (92), N (38)
A14. Y (103), N (27)
A15. A (79), B (11), C (30), D (10)
A16. A (63), B (42), C (7), D (18)
A17. A (43), B (48), C (8), D (31)
A18. A (25), B (36), C (34), D (35)
A19. A (17), B (31), C (42), D (40)
A20. A (40), B (43), C (34), D (13)
A21. A (52), B (31), C (33), D (14)
A22. Ex: Pasta, Udon, Chinese Noodle, Gyudon, Katsudon, Curry, Hamburger…
Unique answer: Umaibo
A23. ~350 (46), ~400 (48), ~500 (26), over 500 (10)
A24. ~500 (27), ~700 (56), ~900 (34), over 900 (13)
A25. Ex: Café, Internet Café, McDonald (Fast food), Teisyokuya (Japanese restaurant)
Italian restaurant, Buffet, Family restaurant, Curry shop

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Last Activity

Our club took place last activity with the third years in November 21 and 22. We went to Oita, and we stayed in a camp in Kuju.

We gathered in the school, and we went there by car. I drove for the first time when club’s activity, so I was nervous a little, but my juniors ride on my car. Therefore it was very far to Kuju, but I enjoyed with them during driving.

We arrived at the evening. I got exercise with my friends, and we had a nabe party. Shortly after that, the number one questionnaire took place. It is a questionnaire to decide the number one variety rankings. For example, it is the ranking such as funny person. These rankings were very amusing to us! The tomikuji was taken afterwards. It was preparation goods for freshman and sophomore by junior. I have come up for president’s goods before. I came up vice president’s goods this time too! I got a mug, a glove and a wallet, so I was happy. After that, we enjoyed that time with them. Next day, we left in the morning. We stopped by eat ice cream cone and bagel on our way home.

The third years retired club, so I was very sad. But it was good for the last activity to have good memories with them. I had a good time with my club members.

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Reading IV News Quiz

News Quiz
1. Who is the person who won Nobel Peace Prize of this year?
2. The Hatoyama Prime Minister talked together with the Korean President. Who is the Korean President?
3. The tape of questioning about a certain case went public. Who is the person about it?
4. The car explodes by a suicide bombing, and where is the country 41 people died?
5. U.S. envoy in uphill struggle for a country peace. What is the country?
6. What is the country extends by UNSC?
7. Who is the moon crashing probe completes major milestone?
8. Did GM say that country of any place made a new record?
9. One animal rush defies downturn for Bulgarians. What is the animal?
10. What treatment of illness is urgently needed among elderly?

Answer
1. Barack Obama ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p1)
2. Lee Myung Bak ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p1)
3. Toshikazu Sugaya ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p2)
4. Pakistan ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p5)
5. M.E. ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p6)
6. Afghan ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p6)
7. Nasa ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p7)
8. China ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p8)
9. Snail ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p15)
10. Dementia ( The Daily Yomiuri, October 10, p4)

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BR 2-06: The Little Mermaid

The little mermaid is very sad story. I have watched the little mermaid’s movie of Disney before. It has a happy ending, but this book have sad ending.

The little mermaid longed for the prince all the time. One day, the prince was nearly drowned, so the little mermaid helped him. She became couldn’t erase him from her mind since she helped him. However her sisters said “he’s a man and you’re a mermaid, so he will only make you unhappy.” But she couldn’t stop thinking of her prince none the less. And she thought that the sea witch can help me. The witch gave the conditions that the witch gives legs for the little mermaid, but the witch takes her voice instead. Also, she can never go back to her father’s castle, and if the prince doesn’t return your love, you will dissolve into the ocean waves.

After that, she took legs, but she couldn’t lose her voice. So she was nearly drowned. Then, she was helped by the prince. That night, her sisters came to call back the little mermaid, but she shook her head. Afterward, the prince will marry the princess who she helped him when he was nearly drowned. But the princess wasn’t the little mermaid. However the little mermaid couldn’t lose her voice, so she couldn’t say truth. Therefore, she could never go back father’s castle. And the little mermaid disappeared into the waves.

I became sad when I read this book. Also, I thought that the little mermaid is a sorry. However she was very strong girl.

Andersen, H. (2005). The Little Mermaid. London: Usborne.

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BR 2-05: The Enormous Turnip

I read the book “The Enormous Turnip”. I think that this book’s characters are very cute.

There are a man and a woman, and they had the garden. The man planted the seed in their garden. The seed became a turnip, and it grows in a moment, it is very big. He pulls the turnip, but it didn’t move, so the woman came in there, and they pull the turnip. However it didn’t move an inch, so they asked for the boy and girl to help. But still it didn’t move, and they asked for the dog and the cat to help again. And they pulled again and again, but it didn’t move none the less. And they asked for the mouse to help. They work together to pull the turnip. Then they can pull it, and the woman made a dish by the turnip, and they ate the turnip.

This book’s picture is very cute, so I could enjoy while I read this book.

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Arengo, S. (1998). The Enormous Turmous. Oxford: OXFORD UNIVERSITY PRESS.

Essay 2-02b: ELLE and ELLE girl websites

What magazine do you read? I like fashion magazines. My favorite magazines are VIVI, PINKY and ELLE girl. I often read ELLE girl when I was a high school student. ELLE and ELLE girl is published by each language all over the world. There are a lot of information for women and girls at these website. So, I’ll write about their websites.

First, ELLE is a magazine for women, so that website is cool and stylish. This website is divided nine categories. It’s runway, fashion, hair & beauty, pop culture, life & love, shopping, astrology, video and blogs. There are each categories comment, and a lot of pictures at top page. There is runway only website of ELLE. The graphics that the fashion shows each seasons of the brand such as LOUIS VUITTON and HERMS or fashion designer are appeared at runway. There are the information and the graphics for the women at fashion and hair & beauty. There are such as celebrity were appeared, and the information of movies or music at pop culture. The women can get to variety information. This website is for adult.

Next, ELLE girl is younger that ELLE and a magazine for girls, so that website is cute. This top page are appeared many graphics and colorful. ELLE girl’s website is divided seven categories, it’s fashion, beauty, celebrity, guys, games and quizzes, horoscopes and MY ELLE girl. The girls are interested in all categories. There are the information and the graphics for the girls at fashion and beauty. There are many games at game’s category. These games are about fashion, and girls can enjoy it, so this website is for teen.

Both website’s page of the fashion serves to coordinate of clothes, because there are a lot of women and girls snapshots. For example, snapshots of cool fashion girls are appeared, so we can refer it. Also, pop culture page of ELLE and celebrity page of ELLE girl are appeared celebrity’s fashion, out of uniforms, hairstyles and the like snapshots. We can find variety snapshots. ELLE and ELLE girl magazines are appeared a lot of information and pictures. However there are many information and pictures that we can’t read the magazines at these websites.


ELLE and ELLE girl websites can enjoy, and get serves. I can enjoy a free time, and I can know many things about fashion, beauty and the like at these websites. And I thought it is difficult for me to English websites, but it is pleasant just to look, and it is study English. English websites can study English, and I can enjoy it.

ELLE: http://www.elle.com/
ELLE girl: http://ellegirl.elle.com/

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Takuma Festival

Takuma festival was held on October 30, 31 and November 1. I was very busy, but I enjoyed these three days.

My club “Youth Hostel” sold the fried bread ice, it is so delicious, and it is very popular. The many customers were came our shop, so there was a long line. Therefore I was busy, but the fried bread ices owe sold about three thousand seven hundred to it. I could sell a lot of it, so I was glad.

Kouyasai was held on the third day. The third years retire from active service in Kouyasai, so I took a lot of picture with the third years. And the portable shrine and the costume of the city parade, the display and the bazaar prize of results were made public in there. My club was awarded fighting spirit prizes by the costume and display. We were very pleased. The portable shrine and the bazaar couldn’t award prizes, but we were glad that we were awarded two prizes. I moved in Kouyasai.

After that, end the Takuma festival with a drinking party, and the ceremony of retirement took place for third years there. The many graduates and a lot of seniors came for the ceremony of retirement. We gave bouquets and memorials for third years. I was glad that they were pleased, but I was very lonely so that the third years retired club.

I really appreciated the third years for about two years. They hung out many times since I was a freshman, and they were consulted about various things. I have a lot of memories with the third years. They are cheerful and kind. I love them!!

I was busy, but very enjoyed Takuma festival, and I was able to do a lot of memories. The three days rolled on quickly. And I was really sad, because the third years retired club. I think that I love them afresh!! So we sophomore wanted to become people like them.


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BR 2-04: GOVERNMENT IN Australia

I decided to read the book GOVERNMENT IN Australia, because I’m going to go to Australia in next spring vacation. So I thought that I should know about Australia.

I read this book, and I could learn about Australia. This book divide into five chapters, and it was written about education, life and especially Australian government.

I know for the first time that Australia’s federal government was formed in Melbourne in 1901. Also, Australia’s federal system of government has three levels. The first level is federal parliament. It makes decisions for the whole of Australia, the second level is territory parliament, and the third level is local government. It divided into three levels in Australia, and the government makes decision about country, territory and local.

It is difficult for me to understand English of this book. However I could know about Australia’s federal government. I want to know more about Australia.

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Brasch, N. (2007). GOVERNMENT IN Australia. Melbourne: THOMSON NELSON.

Essay 2-02a: ELLE and ELLE girl websites

What magazine do you read? I like fashion magazines. My favorite magazines are VIVI, PINKY and ELLE girl. I often read ELLE girl when I was a high school student. ELLE and ELLE girl are published by each languages all over the world. These websites appear the information that women and girls are interested.

First, ELLE is a magazine for women, so that website is cool and stylish. This website is divided nine categories. It’s runway, fashion, hair & beauty, pop culture, life & love, shopping, astrology, video and blogs. There are each categories comment, and a lot of pictures at top page. There is runway only website of ELLE. The graphics that the fashion shows each seasons of the brand such as LOUIS VUITTON and HERMS or fashion designer are appeared at runway. There are the information and the graphics for the women at fashion and hair & beauty. There are such as celebrity were appeared, and the information of movies or music at pop culture. http://www.elle.com/

Next, ELLE girl is younger that ELLE and a magazine for girls, so that website is cute. This top page are appeared many graphics and colorful. ELLE girl’s website is divided seven categories, it’s fashion, beauty, celebrity, guys, games and quizzes, horoscopes and MY ELLE girl. The girls are interested in all categories. There are the information and the graphics for the girls at fashion and beauty. There are many games at game’s category. These games are about fashion, and girls can enjoy it. http://ellegirl.elle.com/

These website’s page of fashion reference, because there are a lot of women and girls snapshots. For example, snapshots of cool fashion girls are appeared, so we can refer it. Also, pop culture page of ELLE and celebrity page of ELLE girl are appeared celebrity’s fashion, out of uniforms and hairstyles and the like snapshots. We can find variety snapshots.

ELLE and ELLE girl magazines are appeared a lot of information and pictures. However there are many information and pictures that we can’t read the magazines at these websites. Therefore, if you read these magazines, you should these websites, and you can enjoy and refer it besides.


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Short List

Magazine

* ELLE http://www.elle.com/
ELLE is woman magazine. This homepage is cool and stylish, and there are many information.

* ELLE girl http://ellegirl.elle.com/
ELLE girl is younger magazine than ELLE. I often read this magazine. This homepage and magazine are very cute and trendy.

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The Fried Bread Ice

Takuma festival begins from next week. I join the youth hostel club. Our club contributes the fried bread ice to the bazaar every year. The fried bread ice is put a bread into an ice cream and fried it. It is a hot product in Takuma festival.

I became the vice-group leader of the bazaar this year, so I prepare every day after school. The bazaar group aims for making 3,600 fried bread ices this year. Therefore we make it every day, and it is very hard. But I make it with my friends, seniors and juniors, so I enjoy it, and I’m glad that I became getting along with juniors.

However I’m sad, because when Takuma festival is over, third years retires. There is it to the retirement of the third years only for one week. I want to make a lot of memories by the retirement of the third years.

I want to work hard to preparation until Takuma festival!! And I want a lot of people to eat the fried bread ice.

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Vacation

I will write about speaking class in October 5. Our topic was vacation, so we talked about summer vacation.

Taka went to Amakusa with her friends in August. She had a barbecue and shot off fire works on the beach. I went to Amakusa too, and I stayed overnight there with my club members. She usually did housework during summer vacation.

Hiroaki went to Osaka with his friends in August. He stayed five days there, and he went to Universal Studio, he did the shopping, and walked and ate, so he ate a lot of Kushikatsu. He worked cram school everyday during summer vacation. He taught math and English for junior high school student and high school student.

Hikari went to America with her friends. She went to Los Angeles and Disney Land. She looked like enjoyed. I want to go to America someday.

Everyone enjoyed summer vacation.

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Outline: Favorite Places

l My room
Ø Bed
Ø Desk
Ø Computer
Ø Listening to music
Ø Watching movie
Ø Calm
Ø Relax
l Bath
Ø Bathtub
Ø Shower
l Kitchen
Ø To make dish
Ø Foods
Ø Sweets
l School
Ø Friends
Ø Study
Ø Club
l Clubroom
Ø Friends
Ø Seniors
Ø Juniors
Ø Pictures
Ø Fun
l Library
Ø Quiet
Ø Books
Ø Computers
Ø DVDs
l Student union
Ø Friends
Ø Convenient
l Local
Ø Friends
Ø Memory
l Hot spring
Ø Sauna bath
Ø Snug
l Foot bath
Ø Comfortable
l Nature
Ø Beautiful
Ø Calm
l Sea
Ø Beach
Ø Beautiful
Ø Swim
l Mountain
Ø Scene
Ø Night view
l My car
Ø Drive Enjoy

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Brainstorm: Favorite Places

*My room
*Bath
*Kitchen
*School
*Clubroom
*Library
*Student union
*Local
*Hot spring
*Foot bath
*Nature
*Sea
*Mountain
*My car

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BR 2-03: The Flying Carpet

I read the book The Flying Carpet. This book's characters are Biff, Kipper and the boy. This story is about Biff's carpet became the flying carpet, and Biff and Kipper helped the boy. This book is adventure story.

Biff's carpet tore, so she brought the old carpet in the junk shop. After that, she cleaned up the carpet, and Biff and Kipper sat on her carpet. There was the key on the carpet. Suddenly, it began to glow, and the carpet began to fly. And the carpet was frying over a town. Then it stopped at the top of a tower. There was a boy in that room. He is the king, but he was captured in the palace his uncle, and his uncle became the king, instead. His uncle was nasty. Therefore, Biff and Kipper helped the boy, and they brought the boy back his mother. And they caught his uncle, so the country returned peace. Then the key began to glow again, and Biff and Kipper came back to the real world, and their adventure was end.

This book is very interesting to me. And Biff and Kipper’s adventure story was enjoyable.

Hunt, R. (1990). The Flying Carpet. Oxford : OXFORD UNIVERSITY PRESS.

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The City Parade

The city parade took place yesterday. The portable shrine made a hawk in this year. The costume imaged bandit and made it. I was the costume group, so I made the costumes, and we prepared for the city parade until now.

We assembled at the school before am 6:00 that day, so I went out home at am 5:00. I dressed the costume to friends, seniors and junior, so I was busy, and began opening ceremony in a flash. Our turn was last, so slow. At first, we went to the Shirakawa park. And we carried a portable shrine in there, and we left there for downtown. I was glad and move, because we made hard the costumes of about 65 people since August. It was very hard, but I enjoyed make the costume with my friends, my seniors and my juniors. Other club’s costumes were cute!! However my club’s costumes, president and vice president were very cool!!

We held end the parade off with a drinking party that night. The sophomore presided from that party every year in our club. Third years retire when the Takuma festival finish, so there are that third years is in the club few one month. I sad that third years are retire. However this during the one month is very hard for preparation of Takuma festival, so I want to make memories with them.

I walked and tired, but I enjoyed the city parade with my club members. I could make the memory yesterday. I want to take a prize of the costume and the portable shrine this year. And I was glad that I joined the costume group, and I could work with my friends, my seniors and my juniors.

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Who Are You?

I will write about speaking class. We are by way of being foreigner, and we introduce ourself.

My name is Mary. I’m from Los Angeles, America. My new job is ship captain. I like painting, so I often paint the sea from the ship. I hate cold weather. I like the summer.

Cathy is from Canada, and 22 years old. Her hobby is football. She hates insects. Her new job is pilot of airplane.

Polly is fashion designer. She likes Judo, and she has the black belt.

Catrina is sports coach. She is from Berlin, Germany. Her hobby is driving. She hates birds.

Michelle is sports coach, too. She teaches tennis. She is from France, and 23 years old. Her hobby is driving, and she hates insects. She got married, and she has a husband, two daughters and a son.

Sarry is police. Her hobby is sewing, so she is good at make animal toys. She hates scuba, so she can’t swim.

Mary is doctor. Her name is the same as my name. She likes Judo, and she hates meat, so she can’t eat the meat. She is from Italy, and 27 years old.

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Writing IV

I plan to follow Hanako’s advice to “use pictures more” (Hanako, http://hanako0814-hanako.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writing-iii.html), because that will help me to use a lot of pictures. Ayaka also had a good idea, “post blogs every day.”(Ayaka, http://pamp711.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writing-iii.html) I plan to do that, too. Yayoi’s advice “be careful spelling miss”(Yayoi, http://pumpkindaisuki.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writing-iii.html) is good for me. I think I will be careful about spell. Rie had a good advice, too. She says to “write with many words”(Rie, http://riemsdiary.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writting-iii.html), so I will try to write many words. Manami’s advice is “need typing skill, so you had better practice.”(Manami, http://manamanamanami.blogspot.com/2009/07/student-id-vwxyz-please-replace-vwxyz.html) I think so, too. Therefore I try to practice of typing. I want good at English, typing and so on.

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Aso

I went for a drive to Aso with my mother and my sister yesterday. We went to Koube takoyaki and, we ate takoyaki at first. There is this shop in Nishihara village. Takoyaki of this shop is very nice. I went there last month with my friends. I like this takoyaki!

After that, we went to Yamada stock farm. The ice-cream cone is very delicious in there, so there were a lot of people, and there was a line. I ate a milk gelato. It was so delicious! I like the ice-cream cone in there.

We went for drive again, a lot of cosmoses were in bloom then. We got out of car, and we went to cosmos garden. The cosmos were very beautiful, and I took some pictures.

I enjoyed that day, because I could eat delicious foods and I looked beautiful cosmoses. I want to go for a drive to Aso with my family. Aso is very good place!

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BR 2-02: The Giant Jelly Bean Jar

I read the book The Giant Jelly Bean Jar. This book’s characters are Ben, his sister Jill and Jo-Jo of a clerk Jelly Bean Shop.

Ben is a shy boy and loved jelly beans. He loved Jo-Jo’s Jelly Bean Shop too. Jo-Jo had a contest in his shop every weekend. He read a riddle and the person who said the right answer of the riddle was able to get a jar full of jelly beans. Ben and Jill went to Jo-Jo’s Jelly Bean Shop every Saturday. Ben always knew the answer, but he is a shy boy, so he wasn’t able to say the answer in a loud voice in front of everyone in the store. Therefore he often said “Oh, nuts!” to himself.

One day, Jill got a jar full of jelly beans. She gave some jelly beans to Ben, but he wanted to answer the jelly bean riddle himself. They went to Jo-Jo’s shop again. This shop had been open for one year then, so it was special. The jar of jelly beans of this week was big. Ben knew the right answer this week, and Jo-Jo pointed to him, but he forgot the answer and he didn’t say anything. Then, Jill stepped on Ben’s toes, and he cried “Oh, nuts!” Ben remembered “Peanuts” is the answer! So he answered in a big voice. And he got big jelly bean prize jar. Ben and Jill were very pleased.

I thought that the scene Ben didn’t give up, and he challenged it many times was good.

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Caramel Muffin

I love sweets, so sometimes I make sweets. I made milk sherbet the other day.

I had nothing to do today, so I made the caramel muffin. However, there wasn’t flour in my home, so I went to buy it to the supermarket near my house. And I came back, and I made it.
I made caramel cream first, and I put ingredient in a bowl, I mixed it, it into molds, and I baked it with a topping as it. The caramel muffin was made in about one hour and a half.


This caramel muffin was outside tastes very crispy and inside soft. It was very delicious. I think that I make it again, but I want to make the cookie next time. I hope that I become well make sweets more, and I want to become good at cooking.

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Preparation for The City Parade

I go to school almost every day recently, because it is for preparation for the city parade. The city parade is a parade to advertise Takuma festival. Many clubs make costume and portable shrine by themselves, and they parade wear costume and carry portable shrine in the city every year.

My club made the gorilla which portable shrine last year. The gorilla was powerful and awesome! The costume is so cool too. Therefore the costume couldn’t get a prize, but the portable shrine was able to take a prize.

I make costume this year. The costume wasn’t able to get a prize last year, so I want to take a prize of the costume this year. Therefore I hope that we can make cool the costume and the portable shrine. I’m looking forward to complete the costume and the portable shrine.

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Takoyaki Party and Drive

September 4

I saw friends of English course for the first time became summer vacation that day. I hold Takoyaki party with Hanako, Yumi, Chihiro and Maki at Maki’s home.

Hanako and I prepared for the city parade at the school, so we were late for Takoyaki party. We arrived Maki’s home when Takoyaki was made. It was very delicious! However, I was surprised that they put chocolate instead of octopus into it. But surprisingly it was nice! So we made Takoyaki and Chocoyaki again and again as we talked about a lot of things.

I was glad that I saw and talked with them, I could eat nice foods. I had good time!


September 5

I hung out with my friend. She bought new car, so we went for drive by her car. Her new car is Move conte of Daihatsu. The inside of this car is widely and cute car!

My friend came to pick me up at the Tamana station. We went to Ariake plaza in Arao. We ate supper there. After that, we went to amusement arcade, we played UFO catcher and we got matching Care Bare and stuffed animal. We display the stuffed animal and Care Bare to each other's cars. Afterward we went to eat parfait, and we came back.

I enjoyed that I went for a drive with her. Next time, I want to go to Aso with her by my car.

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BR 2-01: CORDUROY Writes a Letter

I read the book CORDUROY Writes a Letter. I like the Corduroy book series, because Corduroy is cute, and he is good friend with Lisa.

Lisa noticed that the cookie that she buys in the bakery on every Saturday is something different, so her mother suggests that Lisa write letter to the bakery. Lisa was going to write a letter, but she thought that the bakery owner might not listen to me, so she didn’t write a letter for the bakery owner. Corduroy thought that maybe I can write a letter then, and he wrote a letter for her. The next Saturday Lisa and Corduroy picked up the cookies, and the cookies changed.

After that, Lisa thought that she writes a letter about she noticed things, but she is too afraid to write a letter. However, Corduroy isn’t. He wrote a letter for her. So Lisa thought I should write a letter when I have something to say. And she wrote a letter for her favorite radio program. She made a request for her and Corduroy favorite song. The following week, their favorite song began to play in the radio, and they were glad.

Corduroy writes the letter for Lisa, so I think he is very kind. I read this book, and I thought that it was important to tell my mind.

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The American Eating Habit

I think that the American food that we imagine is hamburger, hot dog and the like of the fast food. There is image that the American fast food has much quantity, and can easily make it. We have such images therefore I examined about the American eating habits such as Americans really usually what they eat, and there are what kind of relations America and Japanese food.

The fast food is immediate for Japanese. The fast food came in Japan in the 1970s. It is easy, convenience and cheap, so since then the hamburger and the like of the fast food is necessary for the now Japanese. In addition, convenience food and the frozen food came out, and the simple junk food became natural in Japan. But even then it is important for Japanese to home cooking. The convenience food and the junk food became general custom in Japan, but slow food is in the spotlight now in Japan because such situation made progress. However, the vegetarian doesn’t establish in Japan such as America, for Japanese has imagine that vegetarian diet, life that eat vegetables thoroughly and so on. Therefore the vegetarian doesn’t popularize in Japan that America

The hamburger, hot dog and pizza are called “Three main fast food” in America. For example, according to the data of 1995, about 5 billions hamburgers, 16 billions hot dogs were consume in America, and there are 36% to the American eating a pizza for breakfast once a month. It is important foods for the American “Three main fast food” as much. However, there is a lot of home cooking. For example, meat loafs, mashed potatoes, macaroni & cheese, chicken soup and the like. Such the American home cooking is base rich taste. There is food called “Comfort food” in America. There are people giving the American home cooking and a snack such as potato chips, but there are many people giving sweet food such as the chocolate and ice cream.

Japanese food is getting more and more popular in the America, and sushi is especially popular. But the sushi which Japanese and American imagine is different. The sushi which American imagines California roll that rolled avocado, crab and the like. It seems to be the thing which a Japanese sushi craftsman made for an American having opposition to raw fish. It became standard sushi in the America. Also, the tofu became popular now. The tofu was made for material of sweets, so the tofu became popular in the America. However, the American tofu is different from Japanese tofu. The American tofu is hard than Japanese tofu, so it is easy to cook, but it is not tofu of a mellow flavor such as Japanese.

There are many vegetarian people in the America. There are people becoming a vegetarian for various reasons such as macrobiotic foods orientation, religion, and the environment. There are people of various kinds in the vegetarian. The vegetarian is the people who don’t eat meat and fish. Above all, “Vegan” is the people who don’t eat an egg, dairy products and animal food at all. There is “Fruitarian”. “Fruitarian” is a diet of only fruit, nuts, seeds, and other plant matter that can be gathered without harming the plant. However, there is “Semi-vegetarian”. They are eating chicken and fish. In addition, the America has many vegetarian foods, and there are many people eating the foods are contained additive and artificial sweetener, so it is the eating habits of the junk food, but there are a lot of people of such a vegetarian. It seems that such things are causes that vegetarian popularize in the America.

I thought that Japan and America affected it each other. Life of the fast food, the junk food and the like became natural in Japan and America now. However, the other side of the coin is that the both countries make points of the life of natural foods and the slow food. Moreover I understood that American was different from Japanese in consciousness for the food. The American has sense of value to easy and convenient to eat. Therefore there seem to be more few home making cooking in American than Japanese. In addition, I understood that Japanese is different from American in the consciousness for the food, but they affect it each other, and there is the food now. I examined American food, the eating habits and so on, and I understood various things. Therefore I was interested to American food, and I want to know more about it.

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Firework in Tamana

The festival took place in Tamana on August 7. Firework is very beautiful every year in the festival of Tamana. I was going to go to the festival with my local friend, but she couldn’t go with me, because she had work. Therefore I went there with my club’s friends.

We went to festival place, and we bought some foods at first. There were a lot of people there. We were looking for the place where we can watch firework. I saw many friends then. We sat there, and while we were eating it as we watched firework. We watched fireworks near, so the fireworks were edge, were big and were very beautiful. We bought shaved ices with syrup on the top after fireworks finished. We saw my club’s seniors when we were eating. We took the picture together then, and we came home.

My friends stayed at my home. They came at my home for the first time. We looked a lot of pictures and we talked about many things. Then it was morning when we noticed it. My friends are very kind, fun to be with and cute. They are important friends for me. I had good days with them. I want to go to watch the firework, and I want to hang out with them.

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Summer vacation!!

There was a camp of my club at Amakusa for three days last week. I had something to do in the first day, so I took part in the camp from the second day. My friend and I went there with my seniors. We went to Shiraturuhama in Amakusa. There was a long way from the Kumamoto city, and it took about four hours by car. However, it was a fine day and the sea was very beautiful when we arrived there.

I played volleyball with my friends, seniors and juniors on the beach, and I swam with them in the sea. We prepared for a barbecue afterward, and we had a barbecue on the beach. It was so delicious. After that we shot off to display fireworks, sparkling fireworks and so on there. And the stars were so beautiful at night. I had a good time.

Next day, we got up early that morning. The sea of the morning was the most beautiful. We clean the room where we stayed. We took the pictures on the beach everyone afterward, and we came back.


I enjoyed the camp. The sea was very beautiful, and I spent good days with my club member, so I want to go to Amakusa with them again.

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Essay 1-03b: Relations of family, friends and others

As I watched Stitch, Lilo, Nani and character in the movie Lilo & Stitch, I realized that family and friends to help each other are very important. I’m going to write about how important family, friends, to help each other.

At the beginning of Stitch was alone. He judged violent, and he escaped from the space to Hawaii, so he didn’t have friends and he was alone. He met Lilo and Nani there. Also, Lilo was alone, too. She lost her parents in an accident, so she lived on only two people with her sister. And she was seemed a character from her around people, so she was didn’t friends and she was lonely.

When Stitch began living with them, at first he broke various things, and he troubled them. However, he was lonely, so he caused trouble. At first Lilo, Nani and Stitch were in good with each other. They didn’t live together cause Stitch, so their family almost became apart.

However, they realized important about family, so they got over various problems. No matter though family is part, family was links each other, but family is happy always go together none the less.

Lilo didn’t have friends, so Nani gave Stitch for Lilo. They were in good with each other. Such as things happened, so they realized important about each other. Nani’s boyfriend also was getting along with them, so they became getting along more than before, and they got over such as things. It is important for us to friends. We can get over our difficulties if there are friends.

I believe that important to help each other when we are in trouble. There were a lot of such as things with them, but they helped each other. They were answer to such as things and they live together happily at the last.

Finally, we watched this movie, and we can learn about relations of family, friends and others are not easy to in good with each other, but very precious for us. In addition, we should help each other when there are worry, trouble and son to us. We were given to think that about family, friends and help each other are very important.

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Essay 1-02b: Not my university life

I usually commute to university by the train and the bus everyday. I have a driver’s license, but I don’t commute by the car. I think that there are good points and bad points about commute to university by the car. Therefore I will write about commute to university by the car.

First of all, the car is very convenient, because you don’t need to care the time. If you commute to university by the train, the bus and so on, you have to need care the time and you have to adapt the time to act. If you commute by the car, you don’t need care the time, so you can act freely. When you like it, you can go to the various places. These is very good point.

However, there is bad point about commute to university by the car, because the car costs money. It costs gasoline charges first. Besides, there aren’t parking area in Kumamoto Gakuen University, so it costs the rate of the parking area, too. And sometimes when the car can’t park in the parking area. These are bad point about commute to university by the car.

There are these points about commute to university by the car, but there are many students commute by the car in Kumamoto Gakuen University. They think that such a thing, but there are many students think that the car is very convenient. Therefore, many students commute to university by the car.

I also think that the car is very convenient. I want to commute to university by the car everyday, but I don’t have much money, so I can’t commute by the car everyday. It is convenient for students to commute by the car. However, if we commute to university by the car, we have to think that these good points and bad points.

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BR 1-12: “The Gingerbread Man”

I chose the book of “The Gingerbread Man”. This story is about the gingerbread man run away from everyone.

The gingerbread man was made by the old woman. She heard a little voice from the oven, and she opened the oven door. And the gingerbread man jumped out. The old man and the old woman ran after a gingerbread man, but he ran very faster. He went on running. Soon he saw a cow. The cow said ‘Come here! I want to eat you.’ But the gingerbread man didn’t stop, so the cow ran after a gingerbread man. Soon he saw a horse. The horse said a thing same as the cow, too, and the horse ran after a gingerbread man.

The gingerbread man ran and ran. Just then he saw a fox, but the gingerbread man ran away. The fox said ‘I don’t want to eat you. I want to talk t you.’ Then the gingerbread man saw a river. The fox said ‘I can help you.’ And the gingerbread man and the fox crossed the river together, but the gingerbread man was eaten by a fox afterward.

This book’s picture was very cute. And I had enjoyable while I read this book.

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BR 1-11: “STUART LITTLE Stuart Hides out”

I read the book “STUART LITTLE Stuart Hides out”. This story is about Stuart played hide-and-seek with the family cat, Snowbell.

Stuart Little’s family went out, so Stuart and Snowbell played hide-and-seek. Stuart became seek and Snowbell became seek. Stuart saw a flower vase high on a shelf. He climbed up onto the shelf and slid down into the vase. He hid in there, but it wasn’t very comfortable for him in there. So he thought that he wanted get out in there, but he couldn’t reach the top of the vase.

Snowbell fell asleep all the time. He woke up afterward, and he didn’t think about Stuart and he thought that he wanted got to get out. Stuart thought he have to tip the vase over so he can crawl out then, but the vase fell over and began to roll toward the edge of the shelf.

Snowbell thought he want to have snack before going out, and he went back then. Snowbell found Stuart, and Snowbell helped Stuart. Stuart thanks for him.

Stuart and Snowbell are cute. I want to read Stuart Little’s other book.

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6 and 7

June 6

My friends and I made Temakizusi party in my friend’s home that day before yesterday. We went to shopping for party’s preparation after school, and bought various ingredients. We came back to my friend’s home, and we prepared. Temakizusi was very delicious, so we ate too much. My senior came afterward, and we played card game, we talked about many various things. I had a good time that day!

June 7

I went to eat for dinner with my senior and my friends of my club members after school.
We talked with my senior a long time no see, because she studied abroad in China, and she came back to Japan recently. So we talked about many things.

Other my senior and my friend came afterward. We went to amusement arcade, we played the game and we got straps share of numbers, and we took print club stickers.
We went to restaurant again afterward, and we talked much.

I was glad that I could see and talk my seniors. But she will go to china in August again. It is sad for me. However, I want to hang out with my seniors again. My seniors and my friends of my club are very kind and pretty. They are important club of friends for me. I love them.

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Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID: 08168

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C

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Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

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1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	Who Am I	209.04.08	5	268	4	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	New Who Am I	2009.04.17	5	344	0	0	0	0
(1-01c) Dear host family	Dear host family	2009.06.10	6	347	1	0	0	0
1-02a (2009.06.01)	University life	2009.05.27	5	305	1	0	0	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Not my university life	2009.07.15	5	307	0	0	0	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Lilo & Stitch	2009.06.29	6	361	0	0	1	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Relations of family, friends and others	2009.07.17	7	368	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	39	2300	6	0	1	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics

M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• Essay 1-03b: Relations of family, friends and others : This essay is my best essay in this semester. I have some reason why I choose this essay. First, I like Lilo & Stitch, and I wrote about the theme of Lilo & Stitch. Second, it is very important for us to relations of family, friends and others.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	University life	2009. 06. 03	47	nice
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	University life	2009. 06. 03	47	nice
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Foreign countries	2009.06.05	41	good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

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2.6. Additional reflections on comments

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  [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]



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3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	“Time Travel: Ship Ahoy!”	2009.04.21	216	0
BR 1-02	“The Inventors’ Club Meets Again”	2009.04.28	209	0
BR 1-03	"CORDUROY’S Hike"	2009.05.26	244	0
BR 1-04	“The Bookstore Ghost”	2009.05.27	135	0
BR 1-05	"Happy Birthday, THOMAS!"	2009.06.04	175	0
BR 1-06	“CORDUROY’S Garden”	2009.06.20	172	0
BR 1-07	“The Bookstore Valentine”	2009.06.30	202	0
BR 1-08	“The Statue of Liberty”	2009.07.05	179	0
BR 1-09	"Pooh Goes Visiting"	2009.07.05	167	0
BR 1-10	"The Princess and the Pea"	2009.07.06	152	0
BR 1-11	“STUART LITTLE Stuart Hides out”	2009.07.10	187	0
BR 1-12	“The Gingerbread Man”	2009.07.12	204	0
---	---	Totals:	2242	0

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• BR 1-08: “The Statue of Liberty”
  This book review is my best book review in this semester. I have some reason why I choose this book review. I learned about history of the Statue of Liberty. And I want to go to America and want to look the Statue of Liberty .

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)		○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? __5_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books (12) brainstorming (1) diary (20) essay prep. (2) essays (7) graphics (21) lists (2) movies (4) music (2) portfolios (1) reviews (15) speaking (1) Typing Homework (13) university (1)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? _21__ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? __2_ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: voice	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. I spoke about my essay http://kumi---kumi.blogspot.com/2009/04/who-am-i.html (2009. 04. 17) I spoke about my self introduction http://kumi---kumi.blogspot.com/2009/06/speaking-my-self-introduction.html (2009. 06. 27)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I became used to how to use the computer.
   

   
   

2. ...I could insert some graphics and pictures in the blog
   

   
   

3. ...I was able to become type the computer more fast than before.
   

   
   

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...It was hard for me to write many sentence in English.
  

  
  

• ...I think I became don't poor to write sentence in English before.
  

  
  



• ... I'm glad to learned about to write sentence in English and how to use the computer in the writing class.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...I should read more English books.
  




• ...My friend's blog are very cute, so I want to cute my blog more.
  




• ...It is important for us to write the blog as frequent as possible.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).




2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.




3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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License:

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